• CoggyMcFee@lemmy.world
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      10 months ago

      I mean you could put dashes on either side of “all of them” potentially instead of commas, but commas also work, especially in more poetic prose. Where would you straight-up remove a comma from the line?

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      No, that’s normal. Might look strange for a native english speaker, but it definitely normal in othet languages.